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LoM episode 4 part 1 and

Posted by technolife - January 11th, 2009


BEFORE YOU READ:

well in the last episode, i saw a few rude comments. if you read the comments or made them, please read post 21.
and since my step dad drops in and out at the house, i wanna remind you: if an episode if split up into parts, i will make the 2nd part (or so on) when hes not home.

YES!!! episode 4! before i started to make this story, i had episodes set up, and this one i wanted to do very much since episode one. if you guys dont like it, its okay. comment your opinion, but nothing too rude or your comment WILL be deleted. thank you~

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* finally after 2 and a half ours, Mana and Hakujo arrive at an Inn and Spa...*

Mana: *eyes sparkle* THERES A SPA HERE?!! i didnt know common folk had spas here! so they do massages and those little fish that eat dead skin?!

Hakujo: dont get too excited. its just those little hot tubs made of stone.

Mana:oh... -_-... well, why didnt you tell me this earlier?!!!

Hakujo: i wanted to see you get shot down

Mana: Your a cruel, sly little girl, Hakujo...

Hakujo: aha... i try!

*they enter the Inn and walk to the counter*

*the lobby had a brown old couch and a few wooden chairs. and inside the fireplace, a blazing fire was dancing. in one of the wooden chairs, there was a teenager in a pink cotton dress holding a (probably) 10-month old baby. she had bright blond hair and was a bit tan. you couldnt tell what colors her eyes were because of the reflection of the sparkling fire in her eyes. the fire looked like it was performing a show for the baby and the girl. the crackling of the fire sounded like it was singing a soft lulliby to the baby. the baby's eyelids were falling slowly.*

Mana: who is she?

Hakujo: Opal. the baby shes carrying is Edmund. Opal was Sexually Harrassed by a strange man on the street. but she seems to be doing well taking care of her baby...

Mana: how terrible...

*hakujo turned her head to the woman working the counter*

Hakujo: Nandla, we need a room and a locker key please.

Woman: OH! hi hakujo! how long do you need to stay?

Hakujo: Just for tonight. *looks at a clock on the wall*

*the woman had curly long brown hair. and seemed pretty old. she was probably 5 and a half feet tall and was pretty fat. she looked like she was turning into a grandma soon*

Hakujo: wow 12:34 a.m. already...

Mana:really? if felt like an eternity since we left the kingdom...

*mana looks curiously at the woman writing down Hakujo's request*

Mana: *whispers* how do you know her?

Hakujo: well, after my parents attempted to kill me, they got killed themselves. and she, Nandla, took me in when she was in the kingdom for some bread and i was wandering the streets.

Mana: Hakujo, how come you never tell me anything about your past?

Hakujo:...cus..

Mana: i want to know! can you tell me tonight?

Hakujo: .... fine but dont think wrong about me.

Mana: *thinks* "dont think wrong about me"? i wonder what she means about that..

Nandla: okay, would you two like to share a locker?

Hakujo: no, separate...

Mana: what? we could share one!

Hakujo: trust me, no. we cant. they are small and-

Mana: ehhh we can share one! i mean, it cant be THAT small...

Hakujo: sigh.... fine. yes one locker.

Nandla: Okay, here you go, heres your locker key and your room key... your locker number is #4. and your room number is #4 also. okay, 20gold coins... but how about just 8 hakujo?

Hakujo: Thanks, Nandla!!

Nandla: no problem. i mean, your technically my daughter, after all!

* Hakujo and Mana climb up the stairs to the second floor, and down the narrow hall to the door numbered 4.*

Hakujo: here we are!

*hakujo opened the door to a small room. it had a pine dresser and a bedtable. on the bedtable had an old lamp. there were two twin beds with coffee and tea stains. across the room was an old chest and a large floor to ceiling window.*

*hakujo and Mana set their bags down next to the door and stepped in. Mana whent strait to the bed and let herself freely fall onto it*

Mana: AAHHHHH a real bed!! i missed a bed~!

Hakujo: its just been 3 hours...!

Mana: so? we've been walking for so long and dont forget about that damned spawn-of-the-devil shadow...

Hakujo: crap.. you got a point there...

~~~~part 1 end
yea im a bit lazy today... but ill try to make part 2 later today.!
the pic of my favorate best friend thats not a human :D
~~~~beggining of part2

*hakujo slowly walks to the bed and lets herself fall into it too, the bed responding with a-* SKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!

Mana: WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!!?!!

* mana jumped up to her feet and broke into a fighting position.*

Hakujo: ITS JUST THE BED!!!!

Mana:......

*mana fell back onto the bed again*

Mana: oh....

*all of a sudden, they hear a rustleing sound from outside their window*

Mana: WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!?!?!?!

*mana jumped up and fell into a fighting position...again.*

Hakujo: idiot... ill check.

*hakujo walked rather slowly and stands on her toes to look out the window*

Hakujo:....hmm.. a man... why is he in the bushes at the back..?

Mana: hmm? a man?

*mana walked up to the window and spotted him too*

Mana: he seems awfully close to the wemons spa...

Hakujo:.......he isnt good..

Mana: whaddya mean?

Hakujo: i sense hes not good...

Mana: hmmm i see....

*mana looks away and stares at a painting she didnt notice when they got here... it was a painting of her father, which is the king, Lorel, and her when she was little. her hair in a ponytail wearing a sapphire sundress.*

Mana: hmm...

Mana: *thinks* i wonder if father found out i was gone yet...? probably...

Hakujo: hes going through the back door of the inn...!

*hakujo runs out of the room, making mana chase after her, but when mana whent into the hall she ran into a man.. the man outside in the bushes.*

man: going somwhere miss?

Mana: how is that possible...?

man: excuse me?

Mana: oh erm... sorry.

man: no problem.

man: i see you've met miss Hakujo?

Mana: how do you know her?

* the man lifted Mana's face and she finally got a good look at him..*

*the man was blonde and very pale. he had red fiery eyes... and was wearing light blood-red armor. his ears were slightly pointed and she realized...
hes a vampire.*

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LoM episode 4 part 1 and


Comments

Sweet Story!

thanks.

Very good, as usual Maizy.
Keep up the good work. ^-^

Cool keep up the awesome work cant wait till part 2

Awsome! your stories are great!

Ch 32 is up!

New Post

and ofc my coments are rude?

that was my fav :D
i like perverted people in stories not in real life and i like vampires :D:D:D
you know... you really have alot of talent there... its the kind of pure fresh talent that could inspire anyone to try it too! :3

Ch 33 is up!

I like pie

New Comic on my page!

*claps hands* yes another great chapter

Ch 34 is up!